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drake Townsperson
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Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 34 Karma: 0 |  | Death « Thread Started on Nov 13, 2005, 12:51pm » | |
Name: Unknown Mostly But Many Call Him The Shadows Of Death.
Species: Dragon
Age: 3
Weapons: He has long sharp black claws that can carve stone. His teeth are enormous and help him tear deeply into his prey or enemies. His fire is the main weapon he has except for the magic he possesses within himself. Though he is not completely certain on how to control it, but when it does emerge it is the strongest force he has.
Description: His color is of a pure black. His claws and teeth are both long and sharp perfect for fighting and hunting. His eyes are usually a deep blue but when angered they glow a bloody red.
Personality: Keeps mostly to himself but it is more likely to give a kind remark rather than a cruel one. Usually quiet but enjoys a chat from time to time. Gives his rider wise and mysterious replys and is willing to try anything once. He's actually more mellow than anything else.
History: Has been more of a wanderer than anything. He hunts the lands to sustain himself. He had hatched for a rider but they had somehow been seperated soon after the hatching. Death now wanderers about the limits of their connection and stays within the wide area he must to stay in contact. Every once in awhile he communicates with his rider but he awaits the day when his rider will call for him to join him.
Sample: A black veil seemed to cloud the moonlight as the shadow flew silently across the cloudfilled sky. A low growl erupted from the black void as it descended into the forest below. Landing heavily upont he ground the black dragon searched for a place to sleep. He had been flying all day just trying to stay within the limits of the connection he shared with his rider. He quickly found a reasonable place to lay upon a pile of pine needles and tiredly lay down upon the pile. Sleepily he drifted off into his dark abyss of dreams and dreamt of the day his rider would make his call.
OOC: Death also needs a rider as well. When you are interested just post a message of a beckon for him to join you.
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Joined: Nov 2005 Gender: Female  Posts: 41 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #1 on Nov 13, 2005, 8:35pm » | |
is he a dragon?
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drake Townsperson
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Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 34 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #2 on Nov 14, 2005, 9:35pm » | |
Yeah! I couldn't really think of a good name. I was gonna use Glaedr or Shruikan or even Brisingr from Eldest but I didn't want to be a copy cat. But maybe it would be better.
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Joined: Nov 2005 Gender: Female  Posts: 41 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #3 on Nov 15, 2005, 4:37pm » | |
you're missing your personality and your weapons (most likely the weapons are fire, claws, and fangs, but still you need to say that)
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drake Townsperson
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Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 34 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #4 on Nov 15, 2005, 7:34pm » | |
OK! I modified the original. So am I accepted?
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Joined: Nov 2005 Gender: Female  Posts: 41 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #5 on Nov 16, 2005, 3:42pm » | |
personality. Sorry we've gotta be so picky but personality is like the most important part
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drake Townsperson
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Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 34 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #6 on Nov 17, 2005, 2:30pm » | |
It's OK I've known worse. I modified it again.
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Joined: Nov 2005 Gender: Female  Posts: 41 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #7 on Nov 17, 2005, 6:48pm » | |
okay, accepted, and I'll make a bio to be you're rider, if you want. Her name will be Aowen, and she'll be an elf
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drake Townsperson
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Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 34 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #8 on Nov 18, 2005, 10:11pm » | |
Awesome! Then I'll make a bio of a half human, half elf named Drake. I'll list him under an elf's bio and he can be your dragons rider. That is if it's OK.
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Joined: Nov 2005 Gender: Female  Posts: 41 Karma: 0 |  | Re: Death « Reply #9 on Nov 19, 2005, 10:33am » | |
kewl!
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